The deadly coronavirus COVID-19 has spread to at least 69 countries, affecting all aspects of life. As part of its disastrous influence, Vietnamese schools at all levels have been closed for more than a month. There is a common argument that children should be allowed to go back to school for the sake of themselves, their family and the whole society. How far do you agree with this opinion? Your essay should be at least 250 words in length.

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It seems apparent that spreading the SARS-CoV2 virus "without borders" is an alarming problem affecting many facets of life. Vietnam is

also

a country affected by

this

virus, and the government has granted all schools at all levels a break for more than 1 month.

Suggestion

It's

widely believed that schools should welcome students back because of the advantages of themselves and related parties. To my ways of thinking, students should be at

home

to defend their health and diminish the spread in public. On the one hand, mortal

coronavirus

has the ability to spread swiftly. If schools allow students to return to school, the number of infected cases will boost exponentially because of the large number of students in a class. In fact, that in Korea and Japan, due to

subjectivity

Suggestion

the subjectivity

and permission students going to school, the number of infections in these countries

have become

Suggestion

has become

shocking data in recent days.

Therefore

, leaving students at

home

is a necessary method during

this

period.

On the other hand

, children cannot afford to protect themselves most safely from the epidemic.

For instance

, they usually tend to throw their masks when they feel hot or washing hands rapidly because of giddiness.

Moreover

, scientists indicated that children have weak immune systems, so they are

also

highly vulnerable to infection.

Thus

, students should be self-

isolation

Suggestion

isolated

home

so that they are taken care of and protected their heath until the disease tends to go down and the vaccine is found. In conclusion, despite some people’s view that schools should allow students to go back to school, I tend to think students had better stay at

home

to safeguard their health as well as avoid booming infection in the whole community.

Mon Apr 06 2020

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

285 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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