Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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. I strongly disagree it is important to
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organize any treaty without the help of
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our society. In spite of
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, I believe that linguists should try to save a rare style. Because all Languages more crucial role amongst people. The ever-rising use of single
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the world, others lose quietly their own History and culture. If a terminology disappears we will lose the rich cultural diversity. Governments
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make communicating easier in Some cases. It would appear that all languages are significant and should be
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
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  • even though
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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