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In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourage the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays,
sport
 channels are steadily broadcasted in many countries, representing from many a negative influence on the youth, which can be discouraged from being sporty. In my
view there
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view, there
 are pros and cons of the numerous
sport
 channels on the screens.
Firstly
, people waste a lot of time on the sofa watching the television, which lead to health and socialisation issues.
This
 is especially true for young which should spend most of their time outside on physical activities and socialising. Because of the limited time resource, watching
sport
 programmes preclude young people to enjoy outdoor activities themselves.
As a result
, they lose the connection with their body and are less involved directly in their interests.
Secondly
,
sport
 matches are always performed by professional
athletes which
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athletes, which
 can make the young believe they don’t have
same potential
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the same potential
 to succeed as they compare with them.
By contrast
,
sport
 channels can
also
 affect people’s willingness to take part in some
sport
 activity, encouraged by the popularity of some
teems
a cooperative unit (especially in sports)
teams
 or players.
For instance
, football matches are followed by most of
teenagers
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the teenagers
 and become one of the main topics of discussion with peers. For
this
 reason, they like to play it together divided into the respective teems they are
fan
Suggestion
fans
 of. To conclude,
sport
 programmes, as all the other ones, are not negative if they are seen moderately and contribute to encourage youth interests. In my opinion parents should be aware that outdoor sports
such
 as hiking, climbing, kayaking, contribute
on
Suggestion
to
 their children psychical and
phycological
mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature
psychological
physiological
 health much more than watching television.
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