Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children,while other think it is the fault of the parents . Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Obesity

is the major

concern we

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concern, we

face today.

some

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Some

people think that the

government

is responsible for the rise in

obesity

while others argue that parents are responsible for

this

.In

this

essay I will discuss both sides.

To begin

with it

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with, it

is true that the

government

could have taken preventive measures to control

obesity

in children.The

government

could pass regulations that require

food

companies to produce chocolates

,

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,

cheese and chips with more nutrients.These regulations will force companies to sell their

food

products at higher prices.

This

in turn will reduce their consumption and when consumption of junk foods decreases

,

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,

incidents of

obesity

will

also

decrease.The

government

should organize

gymnasiam

athletic facility equipped for sports or physical training

gymnasium

for physical exercise. On the flip side many parents work long hours and they have no time for their adolescent

.

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They must find the time to cook proper meals for their offspring. Parents should educate their children about healthy

food

and told them about

nutritional value

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the nutritional value

of hygienic

food

. To

recaptulate

summarize briefly

recapitulate

,

government

and parents should play

vital role

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a vital role

to reduce the

obesity

level in teenagers. The

Government

should organise sport complex in all the cities and parents should motivate their children about sports and healthy eatings.