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Technology Has changed the way tHat people interact with each other. In wHat ways Has technology changed the types of relationships tHat people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

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Over the decades there have been a lot of beneficial improvements in various fields.The
technology
 was
also
 extremely improved. In some ways the
technology
 has changed relationship between people into worse side and for better side. But from my point of
view
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view, this
this
 has positive
development
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developed
developing
. In the past
,
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,
the ways of interaction were very limited.If we want to talk with our friends or relatives we would have to go directly to their house or send them letters which may take too much time. But now we can easily talk with each other via messages, phone or video calls which takes a few seconds to make it. In these days telecommunication is becoming very simple. We can make video conference calls
,
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,
organise online lessons or just chat with our friends and relatives with the help of telecommunication. With the help of
technology
 developments we can make friends all over the world. No matter if our friends are from other nationality or other religion. The
technology
 is breaking boundaries.The
technology
 is
also
 advantageous for
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
. They can interact with their citizens via special
web-sites
a computer connected to the internet that maintains a series of web pages on the World Wide Web
websites
.It is very gainful for business. If there are complaints about the goods or service
,
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,
clients can complain about
this
 using emails or private messages. In conclusion, in some ways
technology
 has a negative impact to our society and
lifestlye
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
. But
,
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,
when it comes to
communication there
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communication, there
 are not any negative impact.There are only positive and beneficial effects
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in
on
 our lives.

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