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I am applying for the Global Marketing

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under The of Faculty of Economics and employment Administration at Vilnius University. I am very interested in continuing a career in marketing, and I am more than sure that

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Bachelor's program will help me to fulfil both the professional and personal aspects of my life. Marketing seems to follow me throughout my entire life. I met the term "marketing"

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at the age of fifteen, though I had known that there is a part of the work which is responsible for increasing sales and analysing the rest of the market. Officially, I got to know

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term when I read my

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field-related book called "MORE MONEY FROM YOUR trade HIDDEN METHODS FOR INCREASING PROFITS" by Alexander Levitas, which was needed because I was running my own online store. Day after day, I read new marketing books and implemented acquiring philosophy on my own quasi-trade and on the startups of my friends. The main objective that I am currently pursuing is to become world's number one marketing specialist.

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dream is more than achievable, but two main factors play a crucial role in its realization.

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is high-quality wisdom, which would be affordable and practical. The

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important ingredient is new goal-oriented acquaintances, who are considered to be even more important in becoming successful than any sort of proficiency. After graduating from High School, I did a big research about Uzbek universities which focus precisely on the marketing part of the work industry.

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, I realized that even though my motherland is an influential member of an international arena, it has improved its undergraduate marketing programs recently.

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, local universities consist of mainly indigenous people, which makes it difficult to do international networking.

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took a closer look at Europe (the heart of the world's marketing) as the destination to study marketing. Six months of an in-depth analysis have led me to choose Vilnius University at the beginning of my successful career. There are several factors that attracted my attention to study Global Marketing at VU.

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covers the field topic that interests me the most - Global Marketing. As a prospective marketing leader, I must be an expert in

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field, capable of analysing and solving any practical problems I may face. I am certain that the various training sessions along with case assignments I will take part in during

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will help me to gain the necessary insight and skills. The

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reason I am drawn to Vilnius University is the international environment its features. Looking at my subsequent, I understand that the only way to be successful in today's marketing world is to make it in an international context. At your University, number one university in Lithuania, I will learn how to communicate with people from different backgrounds to achieve the best working results, which I believe will be the

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, by studying Global Marketing at

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a prestigious and experienced university, I will be able to communicate my planned vision of Uzbek employment marketing strategies effectively.

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, hopefully, I will become a valuable marketing specialist and contribute to the development of my country from a global marketing perspective.

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, the

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will help me to develop myself as a team player and cultivate the leadership skills necessary for my imminent career. I will learn to be responsible not only for myself, but

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for the whole team, which I believe is essential for a market leader. I understand that studying abroad is going to be the most challenging step in my life so far, but I

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believe I can withstand any problems I will face and make the most of the education and experience gained through

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study

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. I hope to contribute my talents and efforts to your University and become a worthy member of the team.

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k you in advance for your consideration and time, Otabek Bobokholov

Mon Apr 06 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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work experience
time management
responsibility
teamwork
financial skills
independence
self-reliance
balancing work and school
stress and burnout
academic performance
extracurricular activities
hobbies
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Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part-time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it's effect on a child.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinio

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It is the responsibility of school to teach children good behaivour aside formal education. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?