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The graph below the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport

#quantities #goods #uk #four #modes #transport
The line graph
illustrate
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illustrates
means
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a means
 of transportation, namely
road
,
Accept space
,
water
,
Accept space
,
rail
 and Pipeline in terms of quantity of goods
supply
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supplied
 in
UK
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the UK
 from 1974 to 2002 Overall, the amount of goods transported by all four modes of transport increased over
th
definite article
the
 28 year period.
Also
,
road
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the road
 was the most common used method to ship goods. In 1974,
road
 transport for about 70
million
 tons of goods delivered while the figure for
water
 and
rail
 were much drop and nearly equal, at approximately 38 to 40 tons. At the same point of time, the shipment of goods by pipeline was bottoming 5
million
 tons. In 1974,
road ways
a road (especially that part of a road) over which vehicles travel
roadways
was
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were
most popular method
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the most popular method
, about 70
million
 tons goods and in 2002, 90
million
 tons goods were transported by
this
 manner.
On the other hand
,
Accept space
,
 pipeline was the dipped during the entire period, starting from a little less than 5
million
 and gain
in
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at
 22
million
 tons. The
water
rail
start
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starts
 in nearly equal to the 40
million
 tons.
but
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But
, at the end of 2002, the
water
is slightly raise
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is slightly raised
has slightly raised
slightly raises
 in 64
million
 tons and
rail
was remain
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was remained
has remained
 constant during 1974 to 2002

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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