The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature. and make the comparison where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates two

kind

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processes

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of processes

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to produce black

tea

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the

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black

tea

results from

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several

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in one direction, the firing is the end system to lose the moisture. In the first stage, the farmers

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fresh

tea

leaves when the good qualities become from only

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and two top leaves Afterwards, the withering process

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leaves the whole on

rack

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the rack

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60% moisture out. The

process separates in traditional method to generate loose

tea

and

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method to create

tea

bags. The traditional technique leaves rolled flat and broken with followed by the release of enzymes from them.

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the modern technique

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leaves

cut

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, torn, and curled to create

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smaller granular pieces.

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both

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the

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will become the instep of oxidation with the rolled leaves on the tiles or cement, so that leaves change to copper colour by combining enzymes with air. In the final step, the crucial part in

oven

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the oven

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and get

result

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by moisture out at 97% and the other side released flavour with aroma from them

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
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20Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

181 words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

withering
moisture content
pliable
rolling
twists
breaks up the cells
releasing enzymes
machine cutting
fermentation
oxidation
heating
drying and packaging
machinery
efficient
traditional methods
modern methods

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