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University education should be free for all students regardless of background. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In recent years, educations are only key support for people to learn and move in with technology. The technically strong person lives better life style. To make it happen University
education
 should free for all students, regardless of any background and culture. In
this
 essay I will discuss some pros and cons to clarify it and make my opinion. To start with, free university
education
 helps more people to take
education
 in their interested fields and feel fairer, knowledgeable, and get a change to mingle in business commodity with great amount confidence.
In addition
 to that it improves the countries economic growth in the Business World. On the opposite side, it might create contractions among equals to prove intelligence in the work field.
This
 situation quite challenging for employers to maintain employee mental satisfaction and feel happy to get good output it indirectly increase Economic growth ratio. Go on to
second thought
Suggestion
the second thought
,
Education
 is for all and not for a particular group or class of societies. All groups of people required equal study options and facilities to get their
education
 in their interested streams. More qualified person can live life in a better way with controlled satisfaction. As instance number of individuals belongs to lower class couldn't afford delay food, belongings and fight to meet ends, but equal opportunity should change
this
 state.
In addition
 to that main challenge in front of official authorities is to arrange, distribute finance, and create equal opportunities. As a research state, if a group of people did computer programming than all of them required jobs in their respective fields. Could government make it happen in a particular time frame? In conclusion, it is not easy to provide free
education
 for each one, but university board and government can make it happen with proper planning and strategies. I agree that University
education
 should free for all students regardless of background.
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