Healthcare should not be provided for free regardless of a person's income. The health of an individual is in their own hands. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

"
Health
is Wealth" - It is precisely said by someone that
Health
is the real wealth and Healthcare is
one
of the biggest pillars of the
society
. It is
beleived
accept as true; take to be true
believed
by a fraction of people that Healthcare facilities should not be provided free to the people regardless of what they earn or contribute to the
society
. They should be responsible for their own
health
and well being. I am not in favour of
this
thing facilities like Healthcare should be provided by the government for free.
Although
,
one
should take care of his own
health but
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health, but
there
are
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is
some section of the
society
who can'
t
afford
such
high
maintaince
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
maintains
mountains
health
facilties
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
faculties
. On the
first
facet, Healthcare is something
that is
right of each and every being on the
this
planet. It should be provided free to
eveyone
all people
everyone
as many
one
them can'
t
even afford
such
healthcare
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health care
. If someone is
healthy
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healthy, then
then
only he/she can contribute to the
society
. People pay tax according to what they earn for their living and
this
tax is used for facilities like healthcare.
Construction
Suggestion
The construction
of
governments
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government
hospitals should be
one
of the main agenda of a
society
so that regardless of age, colour, sex,
status etc
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status, etc.
status etc.
one
should be treated equally and that too free of cost.
In addition
, it is somewhat true that
healthcare
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health care
is in everyone's own
hands but
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hands, but
there are circumstances where people can'
t
look after their
health
. People who work in offices don'
t
have much time
too
in the direction of
to
concentrate
of
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on
health
and going to fitness centres.
Such
centres are not only expensive, but
also
time consuming. The pressure of work is at the zenith and all the time
work
Suggestion
the work
is on their mind. On the other side, people who
don
do not
don't
"
t
earn much not are even
deprieved
marked by deprivation especially of the necessities of life or healthful environmental influences
deprived
of a balanced diet. If Healthcare would be free and
then
and only they will be able to survive
such
hard conditions. To sum up, Healthcare should be accessible to each and everyone as it can
also
effect
have an effect upon
affect
the economy of a country. If Economy will
plummet
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plummet, then
then
people
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the people
of the country will come to extinction and
eveything
all things
everything
will collapse
vigoursly
with vigor; in a vigorous manner
vigorously
.
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