Some people claim that not enough waste from homes is recycled they say that only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. What extant do you thik law are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.

In the salad days of millennium, it is true that we do not recycle enough misuse of our household. The
government
also
makes some regulation regarding recycling of
waste
, but
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
do not agree that recycling laws is only measured that
government
should take. In my point of view, a new recycling requirement wouldn't be just one possible to to tackle
with
Suggestion
to
problem of misuse. The
government
should make a legal obligation for each household to separate all the
waste
into polarized bins. There could be punishments for those people who fail to adhere to
this
law
, ranging form of fine to community service and some prison sentences for repeat offenders. It would encourage people to obey the recycling
law
.
As a result
, it improves the behaviour of homeowners to lead clean and
waste
free environment.
However
, I believe that
government
should do more than simply introduce a recycling
law
. It might be more effective if a
law
enforcement agency put education rather than punishment. In school, children should be taught about recycling and homeowners could be informed about the benefits of recycling.
Government
should arrange programs on the impact of
waste
product on the environment.
Secondly
,
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
tactics that
government
should use to make stricter regulation for companies to produce those products which should easily recycle.
Finally
money should
also
spend on improving recycling facilities and resources that
helps
Suggestion
help
to process more effectively
Suggestion
process more effectively
, whether people separate
waste
correctly or not at home. In conclusion, perhaps only making legal obligation of recycling
law
is not enough, it would not only way to encourage people to dispose of their
waste
with more responsibility.
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