The chart shows the expendeture of two countries on consumer goods in 2010

The chart shows the expendeture of  two countries on consumer goods in 2010
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The chart illustrates the amount of
money
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spent on five consumer goods (cars, computers, books, perfume and
cameras
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) in
France
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and the
UK
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in 2010. Units are measured in pounds sterling.
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, the
UK
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spent more
money
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on consumer goods than
France
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in the period given. Both the British and the French spent most of their
money
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on cars
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the least amount of
money
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was spent on perfume in the
UK
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compared to
cameras
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in
France
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.
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, the most significant difference in
expenditure
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between the two countries was on
cameras
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. In terms of cars, people in the
UK
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spent about £450,000 on
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as opposed to the French at £400,000.
Similarly
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, the British
expenditure
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was higher on books than the French (around £400,000 and £300,000 respectively). In the
UK
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,
expenditure
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on
cameras
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(just over £350,000) was over double that of
France
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, which was only £150,000.
On the other hand
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, the amount of
money
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paid out on the remaining goods was higher in
France
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. Above £350,000 was spent by the French on computers which
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slightly more than the British who spent exactly £350,000. Neither of the countries spent much on perfume which accounted for £200,000 of
expenditure
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in
France
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but under £150,000 in the
UK
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, cameras, france, uk, expenditure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.
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