These days, many people are interested in buying organic food even though it is often more expensive than conventionally produced food. What are some reasons that people prefer organic food? Do you think it is important to buy organic food despite the higher prices? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, a lot of people
is looking
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are looking
for each and every opportunity to purchase organic meal, even despite it costs more than
food
, which was produced
by
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in
a
convention
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conventional
way. The older I become, the stronger I believe that the higher price paid by people for
natural origination
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the natural origination
of
food
is nothing in comparison with the improvement of health, ecological balance and biodiversity.
First
and foremost, one of the main advantages stimulating people to pay more for naturally nurtured
food
is a significant positive influence on their health.
This
is mainly because of a less quantity of sugar, pesticides and harmful additives containing in organic
food
.
For example
, my daughter has an awkward allergy in case of consuming
produced
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to produce
sweets. Not a single bad reaction did she
have even
Accept comma addition
have, even
if she had swallowed a whole bar of organic chocolate.
Furthermore
, one the biggest problems facing the world today
is
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are
the pollution of the environment. As the number of people is growing, more
food
production has been required, thereby leading
to increase in air
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to increase air
and water pollution.
As a result
of recognition of
this
problem and in order to prevent from worsening the situation, many people consciously choose to buy an organic
food
even paying some supplement to a normal price for
this
choice.
Thus
, some studies call
these
denotes a person or thing
this
over-payments as the investments in supporting of
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
ecosystems
an ecosystem
.
Finally
, from a biodiversity perspective, fertilizing and the use of pesticides in conventional production may negatively affect the particular species of animals and types of plants, even causing total disappearing some of them. To illustrate, the blue
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aura
are
area
parrots had been living in a threat for a long time not far from the Amazon river till the moment of full extinction, because of new
food
production opened there. Taking into consideration
such
facts, people admit their responsibility to keep the biosphere if not in pristine conditions, but at least without irreversible damage for
further
generations. To recapitulate, a demand for organic foods is mainly driven by the consumer concerns for personal health, the environment and biodiversity protection. I consider all these causes are definitely worth to pay more in order to prevent aggravating of all above-mentioned problems.

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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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