The graph below gives information on the population of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives data on different
turtle
species
in India
between 1980 and 2012. The given turtle
population
index
clearly states that leatherback turtles
greatly reduced during the given period while
the Olive Ridley species
managed to increase their population
in India
.
Analysing the illustration reveal
that there were 111 Correct subject-verb agreement
reveals
turtle
species
in India
and the 1980 turtle
population
index
considered 100 units
and in
Change preposition
apply
this
year, all turtles
in India
were at unit 100. However
, over the
time, leatherback Correct article usage
apply
turtle
’s number dropped significantly and reached to
only 60 Change preposition
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units
while
an opposite trend could be observed in the case of Olive Ridley turtles
. This
species
continually expanded, according to
the index
, till 1997 and then
showed some fluctuations with a sharp drop in 2012 when it was just over 120 units
. Finally
, the green turtle
’s index
indicates that a rapid oscillation was visible in the population
of this
turtle
. Over the years, this
species's
Remove the s
species'
population
, however
, slightly dropped and they were just over 90 units
in 2012. The index
of all turtle
species
did not change significantly, though there were many ups and downs in this
number. The important information that the diagram provides is the number of various types of turtle
species
. It was 19 for leatherback turtles
, 38 for green turtles
and 20 for Olive Ridley.Submitted by taghva.ar on
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