The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about the percentage of multiple social network
sites
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the
Canadians Correct article usage
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in
between 2014 and 2015.
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Overall
, most people used one sites
in both years. If we go to the five Change to a singular noun
site
sites
we can clearly see a gradual decline to
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in
percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
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users
. furthermore
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a number
the number
one site
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one-site
users
fell, however
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users
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of users
used
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who used
sites
rose in the year
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the percentage of people to Add a comma
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used any site got down to 21% from 22% in a year, Correct your spelling
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sites
users
indicated an upward trend for instance
, two sites
users
rose from 23% to 24%, three sites
users
increase to 16% from 12% with similar
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a similar
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with a 3 % increase to 8% from 5% and five sites
users
rose to 4% from 2% with double the increase.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sites, users with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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