Gone are the days when children dreamed of becoming doctors and nurses – today’s children want to become YouTubers or vloggers. According to a survey of 1,000 children aged six to 17, more than three quarters of them say they’d consider a career in online videos. (Adapted from --DELETED LINK-- It is dangerous for kids to aspire to become a YouTube sensation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a fact that many adolescents chase after their dream career to become a

youtuber

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YouTuber

or vlogger.

However

, I firmly believe that desiring to be a YouTube influencer has many disastrous effects on

children

's mental and physical

health

.

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online jobs would cause

children

great damage

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physical

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health

. To be specific, social media and technology devices can increase higher risk of serious illnesses and

health

issues, including obesity, cardiovascular disease, eyestrain and many other diseases.

According to

a recent survey,

children

’s brains are still developing, so they are more sensitive to the effects of technology than other brains.

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, if

children

use

computer

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without

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monitor, they will delay in language development. On top of that, using technological devices and applications is detrimental to

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mental

health

of

children

. They may devote a huge amount of time to

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internet to find out more information about their dream job and other famous

youtubes

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YouTubers

, which increases

interact

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through computers rather than

face to face

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. Only by reducing real interaction can adolescents face feelings of loneliness and isolation. The argument in favour of dependence on technology would be that

children

can still have social interactions online;

however

, the loss of traditional communication can develop higher levels of depression and anxiety.

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,

children

should not become

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YouTube

sensation

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to avoid undue

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mental

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and physical problems for their

health

.