Some teachers think that international students exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Recently, Exchanges Programs that students have opportunities to meet and learn with others from all over the world have been receiving a great deal of public attention.
Although
this
trend is not without disadvantages, the upsides will justify these. There are some reasons why
foreign
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a foreign exchange program
exchange
program
could be harmful
for
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to
all students.
First
, Since the
program
create
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creates
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
many students from all over the world with different customs and beliefs, some students may face a culture shock.
For example
, students from the Asian,
such
as Vietnam or Singapore, will feel unfamiliar with those from India that
donot
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do not
eat pork and
workship
the activity of worshipping
worship
cows as Gods, which lead to misunderstanding or even
unexpectable
tension.
Second
, by joining the
program
without preparation, students may be unable to follow foreign learning curriculum.
This
means that students who are lack of English as well as soft skills may have an
undesiable
not wanted
undesirable
academic results, which make them
unsatisfaction
with the programs
On the other hand
, these
exchange
programs may bring some unprecedented advantages.
First
, by taking part in the programs, students have opportunities to enhance their English skills. In fact, many Vietnamese students feel excited when they have a chance to meet pupils from Europe who be English native speakers, which help them to gain
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more confidence
to speak English Fluently.
Second
, since these
program
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programs
needs
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need
students involving many activities actively, they will improve their soft skills,
such
as teamwork.
This
benefits not only help students connect closely with each
other but
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other, but
also
build a strong skill that required in the workforce. In conclusion,
althought
even though, in spite of the fact that
although
exchange
students might have difficulties in adapting to the new culture and following international school curriculums, I believe that the benefits of international
exchange
programmes do outweigh those drawbacks.
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