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People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives,but fewer people achieve it. What are the causes of the problems and how to overcome it?

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Momentarily, people face numerous problems while balancing in personal and professional
life
 and fewer people able to balance them.
This
 essay will shed light on
variant
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varied
 reasons which are responsible for
this
inbalancing
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in balancing
 and will provide relevant measures in
ensuing paragraphs
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the ensuing paragraphs
. To initiate with, due to enormous reasons people are not able to balance their
work
 and lives. The
first
 and foremost is new employees
give
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giving
 more
importance
 to their
work
. When students complete their
graduation they
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graduation, they
 are excited about their jobs and give them whole attention which lead to disturbance in their personal
life
 and can
also
 go
in
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into
 depression. The
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 reason is
work
 from home. As, it is very common nowadays to
work
 from home or when they have to do
lot
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lots
 of
work
 and not able to complete it during office time.
Then
 they have to
work
 at home and cause
stress which
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stress, which
 unbalance their personal and professional
life
.
However
, by applying appropriate measures these can be curved. The predominant one is new employees must give equal
importance
 to their
work
 and lives.
Moreover
, they should
also
 guided by their organization and less
work
 should be given which can be completed easily in starting
of
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on
 a job. The
second
 measure is company 's should not give their
employee
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employees
 a lot of
work
 which cause
problem
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problems
the problem
a problem
 in their personal and professional
life
.
In addition
, they should
also
 behave in
good
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the best
 way with employees and workers will not stress about it. In conclusion,
although
 workers form house due to
work
 load and more
importance
 to
work
 by new employees are the major reason of
this
 problem, yet these can be curved by giving equal
importance
 to their
work
 and lives and
also
 giving less
work
 today workers by
organisation
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the organisation
.
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