People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives,but fewer people achieve it. What are the causes of the problems and how to overcome it?

Momentarily, people face numerous problems while balancing in personal and professional
life
and fewer people able to balance them.
This
essay will shed light on
variant
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varied
reasons which are responsible for
this
inbalancing
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in balancing
and will provide relevant measures in
ensuing paragraphs
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the ensuing paragraphs
. To initiate with, due to enormous reasons people are not able to balance their
work
and lives. The
first
and foremost is new employees
give
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giving
more
importance
to their
work
. When students complete their
graduation they
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graduation, they
are excited about their jobs and give them whole attention which lead to disturbance in their personal
life
and can
also
go
in
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into
depression. The
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
reason is
work
from home. As, it is very common nowadays to
work
from home or when they have to do
lot
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lots
of
work
and not able to complete it during office time.
Then
they have to
work
at home and cause
stress which
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stress, which
unbalance their personal and professional
life
.
However
, by applying appropriate measures these can be curved. The predominant one is new employees must give equal
importance
to their
work
and lives.
Moreover
, they should
also
guided by their organization and less
work
should be given which can be completed easily in starting
of
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on
a job. The
second
measure is company 's should not give their
employee
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employees
a lot of
work
which cause
problem
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problems
the problem
a problem
in their personal and professional
life
.
In addition
, they should
also
behave in
good
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the best
way with employees and workers will not stress about it. In conclusion,
although
workers form house due to
work
load and more
importance
to
work
by new employees are the major reason of
this
problem, yet these can be curved by giving equal
importance
to their
work
and lives and
also
giving less
work
today workers by
organisation
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the organisation
.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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