Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children, while others think it is fault of the parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

As population soars and disease rates follow, health has become a major concern. On the one hand, increasing rates of childhood

obesity

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is held responsible by

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government

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the government

as believed by a few people, while a contrary view assumed its

parent

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's fault.

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essay will discuss even though it is

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parent's responsibility

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the parent's responsibility

to take

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of their children,

government

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plays a vital role in abolishing the

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. Children are nation's future;

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,

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should proactively help them to lead a healthy life by strictly banning junk foods with higher risk of

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. Readily available foods at supermarkets are mostly adulterated and added preservatives which is available at low cost. Undoubtedly, Kids do get attracted to these colourful foods which can lead to

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by consuming them.

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, kids get pocket money, which they mostly use to buy junk

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, unaware of the consequences followed. If the

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acts smart and allows only good quality

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to be sold,

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that would be exorbitant for a kid to buy with their own pocket money,

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decreasing the rates of

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. Not only its

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's responsibility, but

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a

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's utmost priority to take

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of their children's health. Parents should maintain a proper and healthy

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chart and check what their kids consume every day.

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, home-made

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is best for kids well being. These days both mother and father are so busy working they ignore cooking at home and kids starts feeding on junk or fast

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. In many schools,

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, kids pack chips and canned juice

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of fruits for snacks. By simple cooking at home parents can save their kids from being prone to

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. In conclusion, it's not just

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parent's responsibility

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the parent's responsibility

a parent's responsibility

to take

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of their children by cooking

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at home, but

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government

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plays a vital role by providing high quality

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. In my opinion though parents should take

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of their kids, it's necessary as a

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to address nation's upcoming generation by providing healthy

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.