Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children, while others think it is fault of the parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
As population soars and disease rates follow, health has become a major concern. On the one hand, increasing rates of childhood
obesity
is held responsible by government
as believed by a few people, while a contrary view assumed its Suggestion
the government
parent
's fault. This
essay will discuss even though it is parent's responsibility
to take Suggestion
the parent's responsibility
care
of their children, government
plays a vital role in abolishing the obesity
.
Children are nation's future; thus
, government
should proactively help them to lead a healthy life by strictly banning junk foods with higher risk of obesity
. Readily available foods at supermarkets are mostly adulterated and added preservatives which is available at low cost. Undoubtedly, Kids do get attracted to these colourful foods which can lead to obesity
by consuming them. For instance
, kids get pocket money, which they mostly use to buy junk food
, unaware of the consequences followed. If the government
acts smart and allows only good quality food
to be sold, then
that would be exorbitant for a kid to buy with their own pocket money, thus
decreasing the rates of obesity
.
Not only its government
's responsibility, but also
a parent
's utmost priority to take care
of their children's health. Parents should maintain a proper and healthy food
chart and check what their kids consume every day. Furthermore
, home-made food
is best for kids well being. These days both mother and father are so busy working they ignore cooking at home and kids starts feeding on junk or fast food
. In many schools, for example
, kids pack chips and canned juice instead
of fruits for snacks. By simple cooking at home parents can save their kids from being prone to obesity
.
In conclusion, it's not just parent's responsibility
to take Suggestion
the parent's responsibility
a parent's responsibility
care
of their children by cooking food
at home, but also
government
plays a vital role by providing high quality food
. In my opinion though parents should take care
of their kids, it's necessary as a government
to address nation's upcoming generation by providing healthy food
.Submitted by anushadivya on
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