The only way to improve road safety is to impose severe punishments for driving offences. Do you agree or disagree?

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Road

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safety

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has long been an issue of concern to the public, and to the government as well. Nothing qualifies as a sufficient compensation when a

road

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accident occurs. Despite the painstaking effort to reduce the death, injury and trauma rate across the world, many countries are seeing traffic accidents increase exponentially. In improving

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safety

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, some people advocate harsh punishment. In my opinion, it is nearly one of the many counter measures and cannot prevent all criminal offences on the

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. In many cases, many automobile accidents occur not because

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the drivers

belittle or defy

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regulations but

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because those are unfamiliar to them. It is an everyday occurrence that rule-breaking acts and traffic crashes are linked to poor driving skills. Many drivers have limited experience in coping with different situations and an inaccurate estimation of the complexity of

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conditions, despite having passed license tests. It alerts people to the loop holes in policies,

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as the loose control over car used, low requirements on driving training and low license standards. In tackling

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problems, it is imperative to require license applicants to attend more safe-driving courses and pass strict tests.

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education, other

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a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)

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as improving

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infrastructure and transportation systems are equally important.

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conditions should be improved to allow different users, including drivers, cyclists and pedestrians, to use roads safely. Other facilities

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as stop lights and stop

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mark with one's signature; write one's name (on)

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, can be used wherever appropriate to curb speed driving.

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, authorities can sponsor the research on

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safety

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measures and effective precautions,

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as identifying risk factors of different driving patterns. By translating these findings into policies and practices, the government is in a stronger position to protect vehicle occupants and vulnerable

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users. It can

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be made clear that punishment is not the only way to cut the accident rate and improve people’s

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. Some other measures,

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as increasing

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users’ knowledge of rules and improving

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infrastructure are all important.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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330 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

deter
reckless behavior
psychological deterrence
adhere
penalties
awareness campaigns
knowledge and skills
technological solutions
advanced safety features
automatic braking systems
lane departure warnings
traffic surveillance
enforce laws
socio-economic impact
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broader social issues
community engagement
road safety culture
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