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Fast-food restaurants are becoming more popular than ever all over the world. What are the possible causes and effects of this phenomenon

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Nowadays, many
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food
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 restaurants have appeared in the malls and strategic places all over the world. Even Vietnamese people, who used to prefer home-made items, tend to eat fast
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 more often. There are several causes and effects of
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 phenomenon. The
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 cause of the popularity of
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 restaurants is convenience. Recently in almost every family, both husband and wife have a full-time job. Thereby, they literally have no time to cook at home for their children. Seizing the occasion, many international branded restaurants
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 as KFC, Lotteria and McDonald give parents a perfect solution for that problem, which is tasty foods with free delivery. They do not need to spend hours in the kitchen and their children still have something to eat.
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, it seems like eating outside fascinates more and more young people. It is understandable because the
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 is quite cheap and they even have a variety of choices.
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, some restaurants now have aesthetic and fashionable areas so that the youth can take photos and upload them on social media. The rapid increase in
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 restaurants has changed the way Vietnamese people eat. In the past, people considered pizza or burgers as luxurious foods since people did not get used to the appearance of
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 restaurants on the street.
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, in the modern life, some families now present a plate full of fried
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 of sticky rice to the family altar on the full-moon day.
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 its popularity, fast
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 restaurants can make the world unhealthy. Many studies have shown that fast
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 contains calories from refined sugar and fats. It
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 has harmful chemicals that will take the foods longer to be rotten. These are the main reasons why consuming too much fast
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 can lead to obesity, heart disease, and even cancer. In conclusion, the popularity of
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 restaurants is somewhat caused by people’s new lifestyle.
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 phenomenon might bring good
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 the negative effects on human health are undeniable. If people want to reduce health risks in the future, eating more fresh vegetables and less fast
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 is necessary.
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