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Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in local areas. Others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own style. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is a controversial issue as to whether newly built houses should be designed in the same
style
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 as existing homes in the same
area
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, or, whether the residents should have permission to construct their houses in a
style
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 of their own preference. My view is that people should be given the permission to build their houses to their own
design
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, as long as these designs satisfy all necessary safety requirements. On the one hand, there are some reasons why all buildings in a particular
area
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 should have the same
style
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.
Firstly
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, when houses look similar it will enhance a sense of community and equality within a residential
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.
This
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 is because a
house
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 often reflects the wealth and social status of its owner. If a
house
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 looks older, smaller, and less attractive than others, the people living there may feel inferior and less confident when socialising with their neighbours.
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, a
house
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 which stands out in the neighbourhood could potentially make its owner the target of gossip or burglary.
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, when houses share a common
design
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, it will be easier for the local government to supervise the process of construction, and to make sure that these buildings are safe for both the inhabitants and neighbours.
On the other hand
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, it should be people’s right to build their own
house
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 in their own
style
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. A good building should satisfy all three principles of durability, utility, and beauty. It should not only be strong in
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 and be built to
last
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 a long time, but
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also inspire
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also inspires
is also inspiring
has also inspired
 the people who live there
by
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with
 its aesthetic
design
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. It is extremely important for a person to live in a
house
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 that they feel comfortable with as it largely affects their spirit.
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, if each
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 in an
area
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 is built in a unique
style
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, it will greatly contribute to the diverse image of the town. In conclusion, even though there are certain justifications for houses in an
area
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 to be constructed in the same
style
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, I am of the opinion that governments should permit people to build their houses according to their own ideas.
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