the best way to improve health is to exercise daily. To what extent do you agree.

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Fitness means not lifting weight and gaini
ng fig
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weights
ure and getting six-pack abs, but it is
to
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ABS
abs'
maintaining stre
ngth level
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maintain
. Fit
body
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m
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.
eans that someone tells you that you need to Run 5-km and if you can do it without any gasping
then
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your
body
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called as fit
body
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. It is so important in life because if you are doing job and working
for
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a job
the job
good company
then
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you need to be fit because there are lot of situation
s c
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lots
ome in that you need to do hard work. If yo
u are doi
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the hard work
ng only
workout
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and doing any strength training,
then
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your
workout
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or any training will be wasted because food is most important part of that. There are Three type of sources
prot
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types
ein,
carboh
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source
ydrate, fat in
diet
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if you want to gain strength
then
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yo
u need to inc
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strength, then
rease source of protei
n in y
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sourcing
our
diet
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. Carbohydrate is most important p
art of
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the most important part
diet
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because of
that
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the diet
we get energy. Fat is good for
body
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. Some perso
n th
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the body
ink that if yo
u wan
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thinks
t to lose fat
then
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you nee
d to dec
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fat, then
rease fat in your
diet
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but it’s not like that if you want to lose fat
then
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you nee
d to inc
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fat, then
rease ration of protei
n and
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the ration
decrease ratio of carbohydrate. You are doing any
workout
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everyday,
then
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i
f your a
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every day
ge is above 45 you don’t feel that your age because it maintains your
body
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very powerful. Here, I conclude that fitness is very important part of life. If you don’t have time for the gym you can star
t your
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gym, you
workout
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at home because fitness changes your life style your
breathing
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
system everythin
g.
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system, everything

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