The graph below shows the population figures for different types of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012.
The line graph below illustrates the
population
figures
for different species
of turtles
over 32 years between 1980 and 2012 in India.
Overall
, the population
of leatherback Turtles
has increased over the period
whereas
green turtle
and olive ridley Fix the agreement mistake
turtles
turtles
experienced a decline in their numbers with the latter suffering the most.
With regards to individual species
, leatherback turtle species
saw a gradual increase in population
from 100 in 1980 to 140 in 1998 post which
their Correct word choice
and
figures
fluctuated before settling at around 120 by the end of the period
. In contrast
, Although
Olive
ridley Correct article usage
the Olive
species
population
fluctuated before rising to 110 in 1997 which was also
its highest number, it later saw an exactly opposite trend to leatherback and slumped to just around 60 by 2012.
On the other hand
, The figures
for all the species
fluctuated over the entire period
with the final population
about 5 higher than that in 1980. Similarly
, green turtles
numbers Change noun form
turtles'
turtle's
also
saw a fluctuating trend with the figures
slipping from 100 in 1980 to 90 by the end of the period
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