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Some believe elderly people should live in nursing homes, others think they should live with the family members. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In all possible media (s), there is an endless debate regarding the concept of "old age homes"
,
Accept space
,
where the majority of people want to spend their rest of
life
 with their parents, while, a few of them, urge authorities to provide nursing homes for older people, who they are living with. The generation gap is the major reason of getting problems between parents and their children.Nursing homes build by some charitable institutes, because
,
Accept space
,
some parents kicked out by their children at old age.The reasons are simple, youngsters don't like any interference of family members in their
life
.By sharing experiences of
life
, old age people try to guide children for the betterment, but they think contrary to others. Aforementioned points explained how people show their interest towards making nursing homes, contrary to
this
, some are totally against the nursing homes in our country, because, they think
life
 is nothing without parents. Having parents in one's
life
, can clear the path of success with the guidance of elders.By sharing family space with grandparents, parents may provide better education to their children with the help of
life
 experience.Even in the article, I read that how grandparents help their children to give right path to infants. At
last
,
this
 is a major issue which people should solve by self,
otherwise
 government has to take action on
this
, because, in India culture, it is totally against rituals to keep their parents out of the house and, after living together we always learn something new, rather loosing anything.
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