You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

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Dear Avneet, Hope you are doing good. I wanted to keep you apprised of

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situation came up back at home, resulting which I have been pushed to change my travel plan for now. I have to take my mother to her brother who is not keeping well

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15 days. I know we had planned the itinerary and you had taken leave from your office too. I am extremely sorry for not being able to make

this

time, but for sure I am planning on the new

dates

. Apologies for the inconvenience caused to you, but

this

is something unavoidable, I hope you understand. As an alternate plan, I would like to check with you on new

dates

, before I plan anything. I am looking at 23rd Oct to 10 Nov 2020. I will wait to hear back from you on how these

dates

look for you. Keeping the weather in mind on these

dates

, We will have to work on a fresh

iterenary

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itinerary

and look for places we can visit. Best Wishes Vinesh Bhandari

Wed Apr 08 2020

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