Letter to the municipal authority complaining about damaged road

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I’m Dmitry Ipatov, a local resident of Kudrovo, Saint-Petersburg for the past 3 years, working as Senior Network Engineer at OKKO. I’m writing
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letter to express my dissatisfaction with a road issue in front of my house. Three months ago, due to emergency work on the heat transmission network, the road in front of my house was damaged. Since that time the road has had a big hole and several harmed paving stones and virtually no action has been taken exclusive of filling
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hole with sand and crushed stone. Due to that pothole, it is pretty hard to walk and drive cars,
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its affecting tires of people's cars. I complained about the mention above issue t
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municipal authority a few weeks ago, but nothing has been done. We have already had some minor accidents, and I would suggest you take the required and immediate actions and send repairing team to prevent major ones. Yours sincerely, Dmitry I.
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