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Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#libraries #alternatives
According to the recent argues, the libraries should be replaced with other better options
such
 as int
ernet. I
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the internet
 do not agree with
this
 view that much as online
information
 has some advantages, libraries play vital role in readers' life because of reliable
information
, comfortable ambience and social engagement.
First
 and foremost, the libraries have numerous advantages.
Firstly
, libraries can provide rea
der wi
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readers
the reader
a reader
th a peaceful and convenient environment without any distractions. As well as, lib
rary mi
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the library
libraries
ght be bes
t choice fo
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the best choice
r people who want to share their views and discuss the subject with other people.
Secondly
, libraries giv
e op
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have been given
have been giving
portunity readers to borrow books for some time and read them at home without spending money buying books from book shops. Another usefulness of libraries is that they only keep reference books which have factual
information
 on a topic while
information
 which is found online can be unreliable or false.
In addition
 to
this
, sometimes the store of books in library includes a number of books which might not be existent online. The reason for
this
 is that some writers may not agree on publishing thi
er wo
of them or themselves
their
rk online because physical books are a source of income for them.
Nevertheless
, there are undeniable benefits of online learning.
For instance
, people can get any
information
 at any time. As well as, one can search any topic without difficulty by entering some keywords of it. To recapitulate, there are some modern alternatives to get
information
. Having said that, the libraries should not be overlooked as they have cru
cial place in
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a crucial place
 readers' life owing to the
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objective case of they
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