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spends
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instead
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the government
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also spends
money
in education organisation
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government
schools and colleges to improve their infrastructure and teaching way. The government
invest
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is investing
money
to gave
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give
government school
to give students advance knowledge. In Suggestion
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government
invest
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invests
money
in the art such
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