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Write a letter to a friend asking for his/her help to make a website. In your letter, you should: -describe what kind of website you want -say when you want the website to be done -explain how important the website is to you

#friend #website #-describe #-say #-explain
Wish you are doing well. I am writing
letter
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 to talk about the
website
 that I want to make. Actually, I am planning to build a study
website
, which could assist some young generations
to
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learning
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learn
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 foreign languages, like Korean, Japanese, and English. I hope
this
website
 including four parts, words,
grammars
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, speaking and reading. I want to finish
this languages
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 learning
website
finishing
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 end of
this
 month, but I still have some problems not be dealt with. As I know, you are a
website
 designer and I want to ask your
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advice
advise
advices
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 about building
this
website
. I hope
this
website
to
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assist people
to
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 learning languages much more effectively and provide a science learning method
,
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 since I wasted lots of time
to
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learning English by using
wrong
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the wrong
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 methods.
Also
, according to
this
website
, young generations could make more friends
which
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from different countries. I am looking forward to hearing your advice. Thank you.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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