The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. » You should write at least 150 words.
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This
diagram represents the way used by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology to predict the weather. Overall
, the process consists of four stages, beginning with incoming information and ending up with the broadcast.
First of all, we can see that the information about the weather is collected from three different sources, namely, satellite, radar and drifting buoy, then
, the data from the satellite is analysed in the satellite photo, radar screen and even in a synoptic chart, while
the information from the radar is analysed in sonar screen and synoptic chart, in addition
, the raw data from the drifting buoy is analysed only in the synoptic chart.
After that, all the results from the previous stage are fed into a computer system to prepare the broadcast.
Finally
, the climate forecasts are ready to transmit to the radio, TV newsreader or as a recorded announcement.
To sum up
, the data about weather prediction have to be done in sequence in order to be reliable.Submitted by remysaleh150 on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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