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Some people are born to be the leaders, others believe leadership can be learnt. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Leaders are the one who motivate and help others by leading the task themselves. Believed by some that a lot of people are born with the
leadership
 traits, while others think that authority is not only inherited but can
also
 be learnt. In my opinion, I think a quite number of people are born to be the leaders,
in contrast
,
leadership
 qualities can be gained from the experiences.
Initially
, some people are born to be a
leader
,
likewise
 they show their leading habit since their childhood. For examples, Rahul Gandhi, son of Indira Gandhi who was born in the
director
Suggestion
director's
 family and he has the
leadership
 qualities by the age of his birth and still he has. Some people inherit the
leadership
 quality and lead not only the business but
also
 the country.
Secondly
, I have seen many people who grew up to become a fine
leader
.
For instance
, Late Nelson Mandela, former president of South Africa. At that age, Black peoples were treated as slaves,
although
, stood up for them and lead the nation to freedom after struggling many years in prison. It shows that
leadership
 quality are not only inherit by genes, but
also
 can be created.
Finally
, I think that some people are mean to be a
leader
 of their birth, at the same time,
leadership
 qualities can be learnt by the time and experience. In conclusion, having a blood of a head can
also
 inherit their qualities,
also
 experience and time can teach us to be a perfect
leader
.
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