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Technology is becoming extremely useful in dealing with linguistic problems.These days, we have

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different situations

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excess usage of computers has its own disadvantages.It is

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computer these days can translate all kinds of language with greatee accuracy.Hence, our children will not need to learn more language in the future. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Artificial Intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom. Do you Agree with this statement? What is an alternative to traditional face-to-face teaching?

For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many counties around the world,rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is positive or a negative devlopment ?

Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.