Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

In recent years, a number of casualties have been caused by extreme sports
as sky diving and skiing. Some people believe that those dangerous sports should be strictly prohibited.
, I strongly disagree with
proposition in the sense that these sports are too dangerous, and
I believe that they should not be banned.
of all, so-called extreme sports are not as dangerous as many people think. All sports involve some elements of risk, and there must be clear restrictions or regulations that should be followed.
For instance
, you have to sign up for some lessons to learn the safety precautions or rules before you want to try skydiving.
, you will not be allowed to fly solo and must be accompanied by experienced professions if you are a beginner.
, extreme sports are actually safe as long as you follow the instructions and be careful. Holding extreme sports can
stimulate the economy of a country. It creates more job opportunities for those sports athletes
as sky diving trainers or skiing professions, so
allows more money flowing in the business market.
those extreme sports are relatively more expensive than the other sports, there are many people who want to try those fierce experiences every year.
As a result
, extreme sports indirectly stimulate the economy and allow the government to receive more taxes from taxpayers. Having discussed that extreme sports are not really dangerous and it stimulates the economy, I firmly believe that they should not be prohibited.
is especially true in developing countries as they have to strengthen their economic positions.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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