Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
Based on some opinions, educating every
youngsters
to be a good Suggestion
youngster
parent
in schools is necessary. Perosonally
judging, the sharp disagreement is the point of view as not only they are still lacking of Suggestion
Personally
life
experiences but also
the poor endurance in their mentality.
Firstly
, when schools teach teenager how to be a good parent
, their life
experiences haven't reached the recommended level. In detail, being a good parent
with a view to upbringing the next
generations become better. However
, in the lieu of being trained qualitatively, their children may not gained
enough advices correctly by the virtue of the shortage in Suggestion
gain
life
experiences and the mechanical instruction in schools. Consequently
, the level of development of children may be decreased. Thus
, teaching young person
how to be a good Suggestion
young people
a young person
parent
brings many disadvantages for new generations.
Secondly
, in spite of being taught purposively
, their mentality in a purposeful manner
purposefully
are
still youthful. In detail, schools may educate minor ways to nurture their child. Suggestion
is
Nontheless
, their mentality Suggestion
Nonetheless
are
vulnerable to learn abilities in being patient and Suggestion
is
endurable which
every Accept comma addition
endurable, which
parents
should have, at their age, learning and playing are being placed on top of their Suggestion
parent
life
which lead to abstract tendency
to their babies. Suggestion
an abstract tendency
the abstract tendency
Consequently
, being had ablities
to become a good the quality of being able to perform; a quality that permits or facilitates achievement or accomplishment
abilities
parent
is worthless.
To conclude, persuading schools to teach youngsters to be a good parent
brings many cons for the next
generationl
. all the people living at the same time or of approximately the same age
generation
generations
However
, the ability of taking care children should be educated from their parent
or gained experienced
from acquaintances is more beneficial.Suggestion
experience
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