Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Based on some opinions, educating every
youngsters
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youngster
to be a good
parent
in schools is necessary.
Perosonally
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Personally
judging, the sharp disagreement is the point of view as not only they are still lacking of
life
experiences but
also
the poor endurance in their mentality.
Firstly
, when schools teach teenager how to be a good
parent
, their
life
experiences haven't reached the recommended level. In detail, being a good
parent
with a view to upbringing the
next
generations become better.
However
, in the lieu of being trained qualitatively, their children may not
gained
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gain
enough advices correctly by the virtue of the shortage in
life
experiences and the mechanical instruction in schools.
Consequently
, the level of development of children may be decreased.
Thus
, teaching
young person
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young people
a young person
how to be a good
parent
brings many disadvantages for new generations.
Secondly
, in spite of being taught
purposively
in a purposeful manner
purposefully
, their mentality
are
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is
still youthful. In detail, schools may educate minor ways to nurture their child.
Nontheless
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Nonetheless
, their mentality
are
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is
vulnerable to learn abilities in being patient and
endurable which
Accept comma addition
endurable, which
every
parents
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parent
should have, at their age, learning and playing are being placed on top of their
life
which lead to
abstract tendency
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an abstract tendency
the abstract tendency
to their babies.
Consequently
, being had
ablities
the quality of being able to perform; a quality that permits or facilitates achievement or accomplishment
abilities
to become a good
parent
is worthless. To conclude, persuading schools to teach youngsters to be a good
parent
brings many cons for the
next
generationl
all the people living at the same time or of approximately the same age
generation
generations
.
However
, the ability of taking care children should be educated from their
parent
or gained
experienced
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experience
from acquaintances is more beneficial.
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