The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The table gives information about, three different nations (Canada, Germany and
UK
) information and calculations about the change in Correct article usage
the UK
proportion
of the Add an article
the proportion
people
who are 65years
and beyond in 1988, 2000 and 2030.
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65 years
Overall
, it can be seen that the population of elders is predicted to rise in the entire period given. The highest percentage of older people
was in in
Germany, which remained at the top till 2030. The lowest Remove the redundancy
apply
figure
of
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for
65years
old Correct your spelling
65 years
people
and above was in UK
.
In 1988, the Correct article usage
the UK
figure
in Canada of
elders was 16.32 which rise almost above 4% in 2000 but it is expected to rise Change preposition
for
till
26.35 in 2030. Germany which was at the top of Change preposition
to
figure
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the figure
of
senior Change preposition
for
people
in contrast
to two
countries begin with 20.45 Correct article usage
the two
after
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and after
next
12 Correct article usage
the next
years
it reached to
25.32. Change preposition
apply
This
figure
seem
to incline in 2030 Change the verb form
seems
over
30%.
Change preposition
by over
United
Kingdom remained to be the lowest in the percentage of 65years and ahead which was under 15 Correct article usage
The United
percent
(14.23% and 14.89% respectively) in 1988 and 2000 but it can jump Change the spelling
per cent
into
20.35 after coming 20years from 2010.Change preposition
to
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