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You have missed some important papers accidentally in a taxi.Write a letter to the manager of the Taxi company. In your letter: Give the details of your journey Explain why those papers are important for you Suggest what can the manager do

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you about some important papers, that I left in one of your cabs accidentally 
last
 week
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 while travelling from Chiba to Yokohama. I took ola
mini
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cab
 from Chiba to Yokohama,
last
 week on 2nd April
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 2020 (Thursday) at 2:00PM. The
cab
 number was JP 0896, and it was a white
nissan
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micra
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 car. The name of the driver was Yuko-san. I was reviewing some documents during my journey, and while getting down, in a hurry, I mistakenly dropped a yellow file of important documents inside the
cab
. I have labelled the file as FDR. These papers are my university final research report, which needs to be submitted by end of
this
 month.
Moreover
, I don't have a soft copy of the same. If not found, I will have to prepare the whole report again from scratch. I would like to request you to check with the respective driver
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 if he found it in his
cab
 at that time.
However
, it is possible that the file might have slipped under the passenger seat, and still not
noticed
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 by the driver. I would be obliged
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 if you can help me find my documents. Please inform me
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 the below mentioned phone number or email id, once you get the file recovered. I would be eagerly waiting for your positive response. Your's sincerely,Nidhi
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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