many young children have unsupervised access to the internet to socialize with others. This has can lead a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children. which problems do children face when going online without parents supervision. How can be these problems be solved?

Nowadays, it is true that the majority of young genera
tion is using th
Suggestion
the young generation
e
Internet
to connect with other people without any control. In that case, it causes various detrimental problems
such
as led astray b
y i
Suggestion
lead
nfluences of people on social media and
also
lack of time for education.
However
ther
e are
Accept comma addition
However, there
also
solutios to
alleviat
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solutions
e these problems. On the one hand, the main
problem
of exchanging
information
on the
Internet
by children is improving juvinile del
iquency
of or relating to or characteristic of or appropriate for children or young people
juvenile
w
ithout any
nonpayment of a debt when due
delinquency
supervision by parents.
For instance
, as
internet
has
been in
Suggestion
the internet
creasing with a high pace among people, it turns into the main way of sharing
information
among criminals too and they
may sh
Accept comma addition
too, and
are inadequate
information
such
as providing with work in foreign countries.
As a result
, it easily poisons child`s mind
and lead th
Suggestion
the child`s mind
em to go astray.
However
, one method to tackle
this
tremendous strain is a good supervision by parents. They can control their child`s using of
internet
and
put som
Suggestion
the internet
e barriers to connect with different people via global web.
On the other hand
, another
problem
facing with using the
internet
to socialise with others by children is lack of attention on education.
For example
, as many young generations are transferring most of their time in front of
internet
, th
ey have
Suggestion
the internet
been ad
dicting numerous bl
Suggestion
have addicted
ack websites with pornography and all of them can lead to physical and mental problems and they influence their study.
However
, there is a soluton to m
inimise
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solution
this
problem
such
as teachers are able to restrict using of var
ious
Suggestion
use
websites for students at school and they can organise extra lessons after school, when many students have much free time. In conclusion, while global web is a main tool of sharing
i
nf
Suggestion
for
ormation, it is
also
causes many
proble
Suggestion
causing
ms for young children which did not exist before. In that case, there are number of ac
tions
Suggestion
a number
to tackle
this
problem
such
as a strict supervision by parents and
also
some restrictions at school.
Submitted by sunnatganiev09 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: