Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to cleat money for a charity organisation. The letter needs to cover the following details -Why do you want to collect money for the charity organisation? -Ask your friend to help -Explain in detail how your friend can help

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am witting

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letter to ask for some help related to a painting charity from you. As you know well, I am interested in looking after a host of refugees as a graphic designer and

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I got a chance to help them through a global organisation. You are a

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artist in the fine art industry.

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why I am asking you to help me

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with your paintings. I have planned an exhibition to support the charity in two months. So, if you offer and send me some artworks for

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exhibition to help the refugees, I would appreciate it including all members of the organisation. I would like to attach more details in

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days after fixing every schedule. Should you have any questions in regard to

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charity, please contact me via e-mail at your convenient time. I am looking forward to receiving your reply soon. With love, Judy Park

Fri Apr 10 2020

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The Greeting

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Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

158 words

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Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to cleat money for a charity organisation. The letter needs to cover the following details -Why do you want to collect money for the charity organisation? -Ask your friend to help -Explain in detail how your friend can help

The Greeting

In many countries schools have severe problems with students behaviour.What are the causes and possile solutions for this problem.

A number of people are moving from rural area to city’s. Is this a positive or a negative development?

money offered for postgraduate research is limited; as a consequence, some people argue that financial support from the government should only be provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in one company for their entire career. Why do you think this is happening? How can companies keep their workers?

Wite about the following topic: The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.