Nowadays leisure products and modern gadgets are widely used by young people. The use of these products reduces the young generation’s creativity. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no doubt that technology becomes a vital part of our daily life as it is shorten the distances and made the communications

more easier

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easier

. Some people believe that using recreational products and new tools might affect negatively on youth, by demolishing their

creativity

.

Personally I

Accept comma addition

Personally, I

extremely disagree with

this

notion as using

such

products could increase not only

creativity

but

also

innovation. For one, modern products

such

cars, mobile phones or televisions have changed our world significantly. Using those new products may be exploited to boost the

creativity

of youth by enhancing their intelligence, which mean that entertainment has been created to benefit us.

For example

, using a computer as a modern product could enhance our

creativity

throughout online courses, which offered by some well-known websites

such

as Coursera or EDX. From another angle, nowadays youth

tend

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tends

to waste many hours using those products;

thus

,

such

behaviour will certainly affect badly on their skills, especially their

creativity

, that’s

reflects

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reflected

on their academic performance which consider as an indication of innovation.

For instance

, a recent research has been published on the internet states that 70% of students who spend more than 5 hours using

those

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these

modern tools like playing games or chatting on the social media, suffered from a declined academic record

as a result

of the lack of

creativity

. As

this

research illustrates we can manage those products to direct our level of

creativity

. To sum up, we must balance between using

those

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these

modern tools as an entertainment and learning, in order to alleviate any drawbacks may be caused particularly on our innovation.