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Nowadays leisure products and modern gadgets are widely used by young people. The use of these products reduces the young generation’s creativity. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#leisure #products #gadgets #people #generation’s #creativity
There is no doubt that technology becomes a vital part of our daily life as it is shorten the distances and made the communications
more easier
Suggestion
easier
. Some people believe that using recreational products and new tools might affect negatively on youth, by demolishing their
creativity
.
Personally I
Accept comma addition
Personally, I
 extremely disagree with
this
 notion as using
such
 products could increase not only
creativity
 but
also
 innovation. For one, modern products
such
 cars, mobile phones or televisions have changed our world significantly. Using those new products may be exploited to boost the
creativity
 of youth by enhancing their intelligence, which mean that entertainment has been created to benefit us.
For example
, using a computer as a modern product could enhance our
creativity
 throughout online courses, which offered by some well-known websites
such
 as Coursera or EDX. From another angle, nowadays youth
tend
Suggestion
tends
 to waste many hours using those products;
thus
,
such
 behaviour will certainly affect badly on their skills, especially their
creativity
, that’s
reflects
Suggestion
reflected
 on their academic performance which consider as an indication of innovation.
For instance
, a recent research has been published on the internet states that 70% of students who spend more than 5 hours using
those
plural of "this"
these
 modern tools like playing games or chatting on the social media, suffered from a declined academic record
as a result
 of the lack of
creativity
. As
this
 research illustrates we can manage those products to direct our level of
creativity
. To sum up, we must balance between using
those
plural of "this"
these
 modern tools as an entertainment and learning, in order to alleviate any drawbacks may be caused particularly on our innovation.
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