Topic: Many children and students are taught to push themselves to be better than others rather than work together for everyones’s benefits. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

When it comes to the issue of whether or not teaching children to be highly competitive is the best approach is still a controversial debate among parents and education systems. Personally, I don’t come to terms with students being trained to be competitive with others.

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competitiveness

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makes students become selfish and narrow-minded.

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, many youths now, on the account of the

competitiveness

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, jealous with o

thers’s

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others’

achievements. They go to any lengths to knock others down on the spur of the moment. It’s undeniable that due to being narrow-minded, students have difficulties in adapting the new environment and making new friends.

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competitiveness

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may lead to s

tudent’s

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students’

missing opportunities of enhancing themselves, learning new things, experience from other people and real life.

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competitiveness

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ut

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puts

pressure on children and students. Always trying to push themselves better than others make kids stressed. As far as I’m known

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nowadays, many strict parents teach children to be competitive.

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, their children feel so exhausted, depressed, that have i

ntention

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of assisting suicide. Being competitive always make students preoccupy about pushing themselves better constantly, no time for relaxing and enjoying the childhood.

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, just because of wrong approach, those students and children may have psychological problems f

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their whole life. To sum up, taking joy lost, selfishness and their negative consequences on children’s life into consideration, the disadvantages of training children to push themselves better than others may probably overshadow its benefits.