Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Punishing children in educational institutes is the matter of debate nowadays. Some people argue that rewards

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of

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will help more in the world of academia while others believe that

fear

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of

punishment

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is

necessery

absolutely essential

necessary

for better grades. I

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personally, believe that giving

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could never be a solution for learning difficulties. It is easy to comprehend, why I am not in favour of giving

punishment

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to

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for

young adults by the following reasons. The preponderant is that young minds are very sensitive and

fear

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of

punishment

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may take them away from studies forever as they would not try because of

fear

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of failure

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and

then

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scolded or physically punished by their teacher.Apart from

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,

excess

the right to enter

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restrictions or punishments may send them into trauma

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;

as a result

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, they would lag behind in holistic development as well as hinder creativity and inner talents.

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, punishments not only harm children

physically but

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physically, but

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mentally.

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If rewards and appreciation is given to the

childern

a young person of either sex

children

, it might motivate them to do better

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.

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, if a pupil is performing

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poorly

in mathematic

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than

subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)

then

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of scolding him for his slow learning, teacher should acquire

different methodlogy

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a different methodology

different methodology

different methodologies

and appreciate his little efforts

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By doing

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, an instructor can encourage his student to perform better and a child will be no longer run from the difficult subjects like Mathematics

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At the same time

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rewards and prizes

helps

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help

to make young

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one

inquistive

showing curiosity

inquisitive

learner as in the greed of

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the prize

they will ultimately do their best. In short, motivation is the key of learning and it could bring in students by giving them rewards only no matter how small it is.

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of

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, people who are in

favor

promote over another

favour

of punishments believe that it will help children to remain focussed on studies because

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of

the pressure of teachers and

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of being punished enables them to score well in exams.If there

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are

no

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restrictions they will not take studies seriously. Apart from

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, free learners sometimes create other behaviour problems

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, a

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study

shows that after banning the physical

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in schools

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cases of miss behaviour and

jouvinile

of or relating to or characteristic of or appropriate for children or young people

juvenile

criminals raises dramatically.

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, to guide children on right path sometimes physical

punishment

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becomes

mandatery

required by rule

mandatory

. In conclusion,

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punishing children may

asist

give help or assistance; be of service

assist

assists

them to get good marks under pressure, it could never be helpful for

long lasting memory

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a long lasting memory

long lasting memories

. According to my opinion, encouragement and motivation

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are

the only key to success in learning

wheather

introduces two alternatives

whether

it is in

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the form

of prizes or verbal appreciation.