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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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While some companies would argue that employees should be formally dressed while working, other organizations would prefer the
quality
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 of goods and services to speak for the company. In my own opinion, the outside look of an
organization
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 is more important than just the
quality
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 of the work. On one hand, good
quality
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 products help in creating loyalty from the customers. It is considered as one of the selling point of goods and services. When appearances are not being considered but rather the type of services the
organization
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 can offer, it results to the customers relating more freely to the employees informally and express their concerns about a particular service,
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 tearing down the barrier brought about by wearing a suit. A person can quickly share their truest thoughts about the goods and services which is an advantage for the
organization
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 leaving room for improvement.
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, appearances contribute considerably towards
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 impressions about the
organization
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. When the employees are dressed formally it highlights their professionalism. More importantly, it shows that they mean to do business and
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 they have a higher chance of being considered for a tender because of the way they would have presented themselves. Relatively, an interview where appearance gives the interviewer an impression of how professional the interviewee is and how serious about the job they are. In conclusion, organizations have different opinions about appearances and the
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 of work. Good
quality
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 work in a more informal outlook can help an
organization
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 get the best feedback for product improvement, whilst formal outlook can strongly suggest professionalism. I still believe that appearances are more important.
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