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In many countries ,children are becoming overweight and unhealthy.some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do u agree or disagree

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Nowadays, in some countries, many children are applying a detrimental lifestyle, eventually, turned to overweight. Many people argue that
this
 is the responsibility of the
government
.
This
 essay will discuss why the
government
 should not be responsible for
this
 phenomenon.
To begin
 with,
instead
 of the
government
, the most influential people for children are their parents. A house is a place that children spend much time on it.
Therefore
, parents should be able to take the children's responsibility.
For instance
, parents can control their diet and enjoin the children that they should avoid junk diet.
Also
, parents can restrict their tuition to their children.
Thus
, they cannot buy meal carelessly. Rather than destitute children, parents should entice their children do some sports and make some of them join some competition.
Moreover
, the school is considered to be a student's
second
 home. Children spent their half weekdays at school. In school, the one who kept the eyes of the student is the teacher. When children do not want to do some sports, teachers have to rebuke with them and encourage them to do some exercises. The principle
also
 needs to be responsible because he controls the canteen and the teachers. The principle can make some rules that there is no instant food and try to extend their time to do the sport and injected them into the competition. In conclusion, the
government
 does not participate in guarding children's lifestyles.
However
, parents and teachers need to pay their attention to the children and prevent them from unhealthy cooking and a bad lifestyle.
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