In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, the rate of fast-
food
consumers increased and it became a bad habit mostly for
the young
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the younger
generation and it caused lots of digestive system diseases, some people, believe the government should make a law to increase the
tax
on
this
kind of
food
to prevent of having them,
however
, I believe
this
is not a good idea and in
this
essay, I’m
going talk about it
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going to talk about it
.
First
of all, it is clear that increasing the amount of
tax
on
one
good It causes inflation in the economy because all the goods are related together like a chain if you broke
one
piece you must be ready for the consequences, needless to say,
this
would be worse
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
to
do
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do, for
for
example imagen
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example, imagine
example imagine
government increased the
tax
on the fast-
food
duo to
this
the equilibrium of trading in
food
industrial
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industries
industry
will be
snap
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snapping
snapped
and
this
would be a start for other industries in the future too.
Secondly
, there is no way to stop people from having fast
food
by increasing the price of it because when governments use
this
lever they do it for
they
of them or themselves
their
themselves
benefit not for good of all, and
also
in most cases, they fail,
however
, scientists believe the only way
for
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of
preventing people to have fast
food
is to inform them, telling the truth is
one
and the only way for decreasing the fast-
food
consumption,
instead
of increasing the
tax
government should increase the advertisement and learning programs mostly in the medical field so people do not have fast
food
by their own decision, not by force. To sum up, I believe increasing the
tax
one
goodwill destroys the
economy no
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economy, no
matter how much
this
thing would be bad for society.

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