In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, the rate of fast-

food

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consumers increased and it became a bad habit mostly for

the young

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the younger

generation and it caused lots of digestive system diseases, some people, believe the government should make a law to increase the

tax

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on

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kind of

food

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to prevent of having them,

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, I believe

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is not a good idea and in

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essay, I’m

going talk about it

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going to talk about it

.

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of all, it is clear that increasing the amount of

tax

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on

one

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good It causes inflation in the economy because all the goods are related together like a chain if you broke

one

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piece you must be ready for the consequences, needless to say,

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would be worse

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

to

do

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do, for

for

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example, imagine

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government increased the

tax

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on the fast-

food

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duo to

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the equilibrium of trading in

food

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industrial

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industries

industry

will be

snap

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snapping

snapped

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would be a start for other industries in the future too.

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, there is no way to stop people from having fast

food

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by increasing the price of it because when governments use

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lever they do it for

they

of them or themselves

their

themselves

benefit not for good of all, and

also

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in most cases, they fail,

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, scientists believe the only way

for

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of

preventing people to have fast

food

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is to inform them, telling the truth is

one

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and the only way for decreasing the fast-

food

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consumption,

instead

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of increasing the

tax

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government should increase the advertisement and learning programs mostly in the medical field so people do not have fast

food

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by their own decision, not by force. To sum up, I believe increasing the

tax

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one

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goodwill destroys the

economy no

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economy, no

matter how much

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thing would be bad for society.