4.Please elaborate on your current physical and mental health, including any dental or oral treatment, medical interventions, and mental health therapy or counseling.
I have a good self-awareness of my health.
Due to
living alone for half a year in 6th grade, I can recognize whenever I am about to feel sick. Linking Words
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, I started playing various sports and tournaments Linking Words
such
as basketball, football, and other sports to maintain my body’s condition. Correspondingly, my productive year is 2023. There are various exciting events that I can’t miss the opportunity even one. At that time, I have three international events all in a week. Linking Words
Therefore
, I have to maintain my body state, especially stamina. I do it by creating my workout schedule and doing it every day for 30-40 minutes. Linking Words
As a result
, I could attend all the events in a good shape. Linking Words
In addition
, I received endodontic Linking Words
treatment
at RSPAD in 2022. Use synonyms
This
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treatment
is to nurture my tooth roots. I have double teeth (hypodontia) and each of the teeth is pushing each other which causes a toothache and it is difficult to carry out daily life. Use synonyms
Afterward
, I received the Change the spelling
Afterwards
treatment
after getting transferred from two hospitals. Use synonyms
While
I was being treated, I received permanent tooth feeling and extraction. After finishing all the necessary Linking Words
treatment
, the doctor Use synonyms
finally
approved that now my teeth were all good. Linking Words
On the other hand
, I experienced an identity crisis in 2021. Fortunately, it wasn’t until the state did self-harm and required me to go to a hospital. I know Linking Words
this
is a phase that everyone might face. I started to enrich myself by watching and reading self-development stories to open a new perspective on life. I realized that everyone has their own path and way to live. After overcoming Linking Words
this
phase, I became more aware of my abilities and weaknesses. It feels like I am a newborn. But now I am no longer crawling, Linking Words
instead
I am walking with full confidence. Until now, I become more resistant to stress and rarely get Linking Words
burnout
even in a hard situation.Correct your spelling
burned
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