Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. Do you agree or disagree

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Almost any day of the week you can look at a newspaper and read articles discussing about a big
city
and small
town
. Some people prefer to live in a big
city
,
however
others would live in a small
town
. In my point of view, I would choose
live
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to live
in a big
city
than a small
town
. One the one hand, it is obvious that in a big
city
have a lot of possibilities,
moreover
a big
city
is more developed. I mean here is that you can find in a big
city
what you want,
furthermore
all of big markets, cinemas,
also
educational
centers
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Centers
centre
is located
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are located
in a big
cities
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city
. So, if you
can not
can not
cannot
find something in a small
town
, obviously you go to
big
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the big city
a big city
city
,
also
there are good choices and quality. Take
for example
,
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,
my mother
go
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goes
to the
city
every week to buy drugs for grandmother, because
this
drugs
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drug
appeared only in cities.
Secondly
, it is well known
that most of parents
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that most parents
send their sons to cities to get good knowledge. In a big cities have a lot of kind of schools,
furthermore
there
are
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is
good quality.
Also
you can develop your skills. A good case in point is
I
of me or myself
my
study in
city
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the city
and it is
innovational
a creation (a new device or process) resulting from study and experimentation
innovation
high school. Here have a lot features
ana
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Ana
and
benefits from my previous
school which
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school, which
located in small
town
. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that a live in a
city
is better than small
town

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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