What are some of the reasons for women to get married before graduation and provide their effects ?
One
of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in marriage
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. There is a widespread worry that this
will only lead to a myriad of concerns in the
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marriage
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has more negative than positive impacts in
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hand, critics may point out that one
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marriage
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is timely
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For example
, women
unlike in the past are now living a more happy married life. On the other hand
, there are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one
is that marriage
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the marriage
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has many benefits for the community in various ways. Firstly
, they can learn more effectively because their
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instead
of other responsibilities. According to
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Secondly
, a large portion of the women
cannot complete their graduation because of marriage
responsibilities like giving birth to babies, raising children and financial issues. Lastly
, in my opinion, the government of Australia is taking a great initiative in educating its welfare organizations on the impact of marriage
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women
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women
to complete their graduation before getting married. In view of the arguments outlined above, one
can conclude that despite having some effects, the causes of marriage
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion