The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016.

The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies

between 2011 and 2016.
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The given line graph elucidates the
stock
price
since the
year
2011 until 2016 of four communication and technology companies (
Facebook
, Google,
Apple
and
Yahoo
).
Overall
, three of all the corporations saw either an increase in their
stock
rates or a decrease.
Apple
had experienced the greatest rate of
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price
in comparison to others
between
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the time frame.
On the other hand
, Google, the company that specializes in
internet-related
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services and products, had
been
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the only one without any alterations and had the least
price
of
stock
throughout the whole period. At the beginning of 2011,
Facebook
and
Yahoo
had cost the same in
stock
(something around 7,500) and it was the highest after all. During
this
year
, each of the communications companies
Apple
and Google
,
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had a value of about 5000 and 1000 respectively. By the
year
2012,
Apple
saw
a
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dramatic and sharp growth, hitting the highest point ever nearly 35,000.
Facebook
as well, saw a slight rise up to 10,000 and it was growing up progressively.
While
in contrast
,
Yahoo
started to follow the pattern belonged to
Facebook
, but exactly
opposite
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of that. So the
stock
rate’s value began to reduce for
this
agency. Surprisingly, after a
year
,
Apple
faced a fall as suddenly as its growth
last
year
. Its rate
price
was almost what it used to be at the starting step, but a little more.
Facebook
and
Yahoo
were following in opposite directions and they
also
continued with that until the end of 2016 (20,000 and approximately 2,500 value for each respectively
at the end
of the period).
Apple
had been consistently experiencing unpredictable fluctuations. It rose again in 2014,
whereas
it was hitting
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lowest point of all.
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last
, between 2015 and 2016, the
stock
rate for
this
company has improved since the past
year
(mostly what it was in 2011).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stock, price, year, facebook, apple, yahoo with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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