Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter • give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre • explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community • describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

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Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings to the day!!!! I would like to share in our locality peoples feelings due to closing a sports and leisure public

centre

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. We have been utilising

this

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public

centre

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since 2011

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while using the tennis with neighbours at evening time.These collaborations have been

such

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a wonderful experience with them for children and adults, senior

citizens

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too.During summer we associated with kids' activities often. Food distribution, Old clothes distribution had been provided by the neighbourhood people if there is any occasion in Leisure

centre

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. Especially, Games and

motivated

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motivating

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centre

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are providing physical fitness and mental health for residence.

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lucky to get

this

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council for many years.

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, we gain a lot of friends and

well wishers

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than Senior citizens give their suggestions that will be useful to us in personal life how to lead a life with patients. At evening hour playing a sport that could be given

such

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a relief and get entertainment with family

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Further more

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spend some hour knowledge sharing in all subjects. We heard for the purpose of

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closing, saving money

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if it is

specific

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reason we all are ready to pay some amount, while we using the local

centre

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then

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you can save little bit money.

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10$ for adults, 5$ for children that must be used to save time money. Please consider

above

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opinions, If possible to run

community

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the community

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will be a lot of help to us. Kindly understand community peoples feelings. Yours sincerely, Trend community.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

257 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

leisure centre
foster social bonds
physical health
mental well-being
constructive activities
accessible
exercise
community spirit
public service
anti-social behavior
cost-saving measures
vital role
recreation
negative impact
forecast

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