Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter • give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre • explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community • describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings to the day!!!!
I would like to share in our locality peoples feelings due to closing a sports and leisure public
centre
. We have been utilising this
public centre
since 2011,
while using the tennis with neighbours at evening time.These collaborations have been Remove the comma
apply
such
a wonderful experience with them for children and adults, senior citizens
too.During summer we associated with kids' activities often. Food distribution, Old clothes distribution had been provided by the neighbourhood people if there is any occasion in Leisure Add the comma(s)
,citizens
centre
.
Especially, Games and motivated
Replace the word
motivating
centre
are providing physical fitness and mental health for residence. Fix the agreement mistake
centres
We
lucky to get Add a verb
areWe
wereWe
this
council for many years. In addition
, we gain a lot of friends and well wishers
than Senior citizens give their suggestions that will be useful to us in personal life how to lead a life with patients. At evening hour playing a sport that could be given Add a hyphen
well-wishers
such
a relief and get entertainment with family also
. Correct your spelling
Furthermore
Further more
spend some hour knowledge sharing in all subjects.
We heard for the purpose of Correct your spelling
Furthermore
this
closing, saving money,
if it is Remove the comma
apply
specific
reason we all are ready to pay some amount, while we using the local Add an article
a specific
centre
then
you can save little bit money. For example
: going to take a monthly fee for
10$ for adults, 5$ for children that must be used to save time money.
Please consider Change preposition
of
above
opinions, If possible to run Correct article usage
the above
community
Correct article usage
the community
it
will be a lot of help to us.
Kindly understand community peoples feelings.
Yours sincerely,
Trend community.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- however
- although
- even though
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